Sophomore Essay
Introduction
In English class for sophomore year we had to research a subject and create a solution to the real world problem possibly. I chose to do my topic on Domestic Violence which I researched and tried to see if there is a solution. There is one way, but it includes complete cut off contact between the victim and abuser in which the victim has to willingly do it and it is a hard process if the victim. There are a number of ways things could play out and all depends on certain variables, but no one should have to endure being abused in any way. So I did my sophomore essay and presented it to the class in a 5 minute speech which went well.
Sophomore Essay Below
The diagram picture below I got from a friend who talked to the counselor who gave her to give me something to help me with my sophomore speech topic which is below
Reflection
Two things I did well was manage my time wisely when doing my sophomore speech and organizing which was hard but I managed to keep my notes cleaned up and easy to access which helped. Two things I did not do so well is that even though my speech went well, I accidentally forgot to mention evidence then later learned personal experience could count. I forgot to mention evidence for I believed the only evidence I needed was to be used in my essay but looking back it would've helped my point to have evidence. Another thing I did not do so well is grammar, I really struggled with that. But those two things I can improve by paying attention more and practicing correct grammar.